I like the simplistic idea of the song, it's easy to listen to and easy to add onto like you did. It's pretty quiet but that's just about all that I would fix.

This sounds like an amazing twist on a Virtual Riot style song, especially with the never let me go vocal lol. I found the electric guitar unexpected but somehow fitting in the happy theme of the song. I'm very glad I came across this song because it's given me some inspiration for my own music production.

- MrMeow :)

Sucks that it has such a low rating, I really like it. There is a synth near the middle that's a bit too loud in the transition to the new melody but besides that it sounds great.